Writing Goals/ Vocabulary

Goals

1.) Using Syntactic Devices to score higher in idea development and content

2.) Improving my conclusions in essays by using a reflection technique

3.) Posting at least one poetry piece on my blog each month, wither to be graded , or just for fun

4.) Making sure that my next writing piece is error free and is proof read by more than one person.


Vocab

-Ornate- Elaborate, kind of complicated
-Deft- skillful, handy or clever. deft hands; a deft mechanic.
-Addle- to confuse
-Contrive- to affect, plot, or imitate
-Ease- free of pain
-Aghast- horrified, dumbfounded
Dictionary



Thursday, September 23, 2010

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

In my first blog post, I am going to be talking about Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix (that's the fifth one for those of you who don't know). This is my second time reading the series and I highly recommend these books to anyone who hasn't yet read them.
As you probably know, Harry Potter, who is now 13, is a wizard. He starts out his summer almost being expelled from his school, Hogwarts. Luckily he is saved my the mysterious headmaster, Dumbledore. But when he gets back to school, strange things are happening. The Ministry, which is sort of like the wizard government, is taking over Hogwarts. They fire all of the teachers and change all of the rules and naturally, the new headmistress hates Harry. Meanwhile, at Harry's new home, his uncle who is known as a murderer, is in trouble. Harry must survive school, get Dumbledore back, and clear his uncle's name, while hiding from and training to battle his infamous enemy, Lord Voldemort.
However, like all other teenage boys, Harry Potter also has to deal with friend problems and girl troubles, too. The Order of the Phoenix is a secret society made of friendly people that are all anti-Voldemort, and have all trained hard to fight him. But they always have time to help Harry out with his problems too.
This is one of my favorite in the series and if you haven't already, you should definitely read it.

6 comments:

  1. Very nice Sara. I have only read one of the Harry Potter books- The Deathly Hallows which is the last one. Maybe I should actually read all of the others. The Order of the Phoenix sounds like it's quite interesting.

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  2. Probably a smart idea Mai, thanks for commenting.

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  3. Wow Sara your blog looks great! How did you get the fish at the bottom and the voting thing at the top?

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  4. When you are logged in go to design at the top right and just explore.

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  5. The order of the Phoenix is one of my favorite Harry Potter books and I think you explained it very well.

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  6. This is a nice first entry. I like that your first entry is a selection you really care for. I am also looking forward to reading your next entries. As soon as you possibly can, let's get together and set some writing goals to monitor improvement, and challenge you to grow in some new directions.

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